You crumbled into my chest from the relief of seeing me - wrapped your arms around me so we were bound together by our limbs and stuck your head below mine into my neck.
And amongst the heaven of being back and the words of some small love that drifted in the middle of us I breathed in your scent, passing my nose over your head.
Between the fruits of your perfume and the hollow woodiness of your hair were the tell-tale signs that you hadn’t slept for a few days – the salty taste of tears that slapped my cheeks and the smell of dirt.
Broken cornfields of dry hair lay below my eyes where I kissed your head, glad to be home.
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*whitesidevampire told me to write something about the smell of someone's hair
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CommentsYeah, I love this.
I don't even know what to say. The last line gave me shivers. Absolutely beautiful.
-- [Clare is] basically the dutchess of twee. - Sam  Beautifuly written, its great to see your writing again!
 -- "You cannot teach a man anything; you can only help him to find it within himself" =DailyDeviants *WordCount *WritersForArt And a very good something about the smell of someone's hair it is too. Really, beautiful. <3
-- <Danium> whitesidevampire: I finally know who you remind me of  <Danium> whitesidevampire: this friend of mine, she's uberwhite and has blackhair and slutty like you  That's beautiful :3
XD this is gonna sound weird but thanks for writing this :3 -- Fix up, look sharp. Hereeeeeeeeeeee's Johnny! mmmmmmmm hair is yummy
-- there is no applause Do i get rewards now? 8D
-- ~thingsareprettyokay #getLIT for people who think writing is just tops PUBLIC TRANSPORTATION BROS YO!!!  -- Fix up, look sharp. Hereeeeeeeeeeee's Johnny! Aw. I love it. And ilY! :D
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